I feel a bit sad about this post because recently I've ended my final homework assignment for this class. It means that our course has come to its end. Evrything seems sad when you realise that it's over... Well, now I go back to my essay that is dedicated to public and private transportation.
The main difference between this essay and all previous ones is that this time I had to use my knowldge and factual information provided in different sources more than my own experiences. That's why you should be more careful with essay's logic than you always are. It requires much more efforts! I managed to finish the assignment only because of my dedication to the topic which I've chosen. Special attention should be given not only to your essay, but also to the sources you're working with.
The best thing in my essay, I think, is that I included many specific information which could not be obtained by simple reasoning and thus accessible to everyone. I hope that readers (David...) will learn something new form my essay. While working with the sources I discovered that we've already tried to learn some useful mathematical applications to talk about my topic professionally (such as Brauer Theorem), although I still cannot understand most of articles covering my topic because of lack of mathematical knowledge.
I realise that my essay has plenty of weaknesses. Some of them are due to the reason of lack of skills I mentioned before. But most of them, I suppose, are again connected with explicity of my thoughts (thesis, topic and concluding sentences!) and wandering away from the topic I discuss. Also, I'm afraid I used too mechanical arguments that cannot convince people to believe what I wrote about.
Unfortunately, only David, I think, could understand what I discussed here because he is the only reader of my essay by now. Maybe, when I get 3d draft returned, I post it here, so you can read it and share my opinions about it. Thank you for reading.
The main difference between this essay and all previous ones is that this time I had to use my knowldge and factual information provided in different sources more than my own experiences. That's why you should be more careful with essay's logic than you always are. It requires much more efforts! I managed to finish the assignment only because of my dedication to the topic which I've chosen. Special attention should be given not only to your essay, but also to the sources you're working with.
The best thing in my essay, I think, is that I included many specific information which could not be obtained by simple reasoning and thus accessible to everyone. I hope that readers (David...) will learn something new form my essay. While working with the sources I discovered that we've already tried to learn some useful mathematical applications to talk about my topic professionally (such as Brauer Theorem), although I still cannot understand most of articles covering my topic because of lack of mathematical knowledge.
I realise that my essay has plenty of weaknesses. Some of them are due to the reason of lack of skills I mentioned before. But most of them, I suppose, are again connected with explicity of my thoughts (thesis, topic and concluding sentences!) and wandering away from the topic I discuss. Also, I'm afraid I used too mechanical arguments that cannot convince people to believe what I wrote about.
Unfortunately, only David, I think, could understand what I discussed here because he is the only reader of my essay by now. Maybe, when I get 3d draft returned, I post it here, so you can read it and share my opinions about it. Thank you for reading.
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